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Showing posts with label winter haiku. Show all posts
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Sunday, 21 December 2025

Asahi Haikuist Network: David McMurray's winter selections

 The winter solstice/Christmas/New Year's Eve bring a very mixed bag of memories and emotions for me.

Christmas vacation

tame ducks starving

by the campus lake

Chris/cricket


ASAHI HAIKUIST NETWORK/ David McMurray

December 19, 2025 at 08:00 JST

Photo/Illutration(Illustration by Mitsuaki Kojima)

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neglecting nothing in his song, I wept in my seat
--Patrick Sweeney (Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania)

* * *

I hum...
a veil of snowflakes
our favorite aria
--Rita R. Melissano (Rock Island, Illinois)

* * *

in my sigh
the silence of all
your words
--Eta Grubesic (Bukovac, Serbia)

* * *

accompanying
the Christmas bells
a flurry of goldfinches
--Claire Ninham (North Yorkshire, England)

* * *

I feel whiffs of death
fanning my withering cheeks
that have smiled so much...
--Alan Maley (Canterbury, England)

* * *

expecting
a Christmas bump
June wedding
--Mike Gallagher (Listowel, Ireland)

* * *

my very first job:
bundling Christmas trees for sale--
I can smell the pine
--James Penha (Bali, Indonesia)

* * *

silencing the drones
and shrieks
a newborn
--Kavita Ratna (Bangalore, India)

* * *

circles within circles
the percussion of rain
swan song
--Randy Brooks (Taylorville, Illinois)

* * *

children gone--
we go on playing
as we put away the toys
--Sanjana Zorinc (Bjelovar, Croatia)

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FROM THE NOTEBOOK
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Roadhouse on one side
churchyard on the other
Hank Williams’ “lost highway”
--Carl Brennan (North Syracuse, New York)

While listening to his favorite crooner on the radio, do you think the haikuist pulled off the road to the right or to the left? Slobodan Pupovac drove straight ahead. Jerome Berglund questioned the path he took.

traffic light
green light
just for me

* * *

herding reindeer
maybe I was
good enough

In this final column for the year, we come to realize that a poem’s ending is not a singular event but rather a lingering moment that reflects complex process involving the haikuist, the structure of the haiku, its lines of questioning and our reader’s interpretation. In Nagoya, Satoru Kanematsu sat for a portrait, all the while thinking about his “dear old friends that had passed away far into the next world.”

Grandson draws
my portrait youngish
Elder’s Day

Mourning in Nowy Targ, Poland, Krzysztof Kokot marked the death of Slawa Sibiga (1950-2025), a frequent contributor to this column.

a door cracked open--
one cannot just leave
without saying goodbye

Haikuists are poised to pen haiku on Dec. 21, the winter solstice. Mariola Grabowska hopes the shortest day of the year will shine a little brighter in Warsaw, Poland.

swansong
the artist adds more shine
to the sunset

Mike Fainzilber noted that the length of this winter season will likely be longer because the average durations of spring and fall in Tel Aviv, Israel, have dramatically shortened. 

Israeli autumn
sometimes it lasts
a whole week

In the woods nearby Luciana Moretto’s home in Treviso, Italy, “the trees are still all green and the sun is still hot.”

start of winter
last of the four seasons...
chaos under heaven

Climatologists at Mie University concur that the trend toward longer summers and later starting winters will intensify if global warming continues. Sergio DeMiglio recalled the warmest year on record in Toronto, Ontario.

Though the year has passed
warm memories endure
between friends

Alexander Groth dusted photograph frames in Berlin, Germany. Looking forward to Christmas in Tokyo, Murasaki Sagano watched a child pen a wish list.

on the mantelpiece--
a remembrance of
warmer times

* * *

on the shelf
beside Elmo’s books
“A letter to Santa”

Madhuri Pillai reminisced with her siblings in Melbourne, Australia.

photo album...
turning the pages of childhood
the bliss of endless sunshine

* * *

sibling holiday
how soon we revert
to childhood

Lilia Racheva tippled a glass of fruit brandy--“a favorite of the women in our family”--just before dinnertime.

sour cherry liqueur--
soft light
in mom’s kitchen

Charlie Smith chuckled contentedly in Raleigh, North Carolina.

old friends pour
Christmas spirits
into new laughter

Marion Clarke painted this line across Warrenpoint, Northern Ireland.

last blast of scarlet Virginia creeper

Brennan saluted the Stars and Stripes and his neighbors blew their horns in unison.

Snow in the forecast
all the leaf-blowers at once--
garden flags astir

John S. Gilbertson paid for a last round of drinks at a restaurant in Greenville, South Carolina. Moretto toasted with a swansong.

waitress pushes drinks,
at the end of the season,
winter is dryer

* * *

passion for singing
to death
myth of cicadas

Ramona Linke sang with the ghost of Christmas past in Saxony-Anhalt, Germany.

in the hayloft
the old wraith whistles
our song

Tsanka Shishkova dropped the needle onto a record and began to lip-synch in Sofia, Bulgaria. Then, the haikuist played “Happy Xmas” by John Lennon and Yoko Ono.

music and colors
in the cosmos of soul
divine gift

* * *

war is over
will his father be at home
for Christmas

As if celebrating aboard a cruise ship in the Adriatic Sea, Giuliana Ravaglia imagined dancing a few tango steps wearing a dress the color of red leaves.

autumn leaves--
staggering on the deck
at every step

Sagano admired cold-resilient red blooms.

rouged lips
even on an aged woman
winter camellias

David Cox puckered up for a kiss in Brno, Czechia. The haikuist peacefully reflected on how joyful it once was to eat a whole cookie house at Christmastime in Torquay, England.

rounded nests--
holding on through winter
mistletoe’s reach

* * *

layered memory
grandma’s gingerbread
iced at the edges

Levko Dovgan eyes glistened in war-torn Lviv, Ukraine.

November sleet
The first chocolate Santas
in the shop window

After a short visit to Neuenkirchen, Germany, Alexander Groth looked back longingly hoping to return.

winter sun
my grandmother’s smile
in the hospital window

Helga Stania looked wistfully at the outlines of cirques and crevasses on snowy mountains in Ettiswil, Switzerland.

autumn weaves--her last mountain walk

Oh dear, Mona Bedi’s haiku seems to imply that a housekeeper’s work in Delhi, India, will never end.

gran’s will
all her silverware bequeathed
to the loyal maid

Marilyn Henighan bid adieu to high-flyers over Ottawa, Ontario.

high in the sky
wild Canada geese honking
I wave goodbye

Isabella Kramer started counting down in Nienhagen, Germany.

remaining nights
the moth in my mouth
every Monday morning

Sagano rewound the crank key in preparation to ring in another new year in Tokyo.

Five minutes late…
but we’ve gone a long way
old clockwork

Distracted by a pair of ducks squabbling on a river in Takamatsu, Kagawa Prefecture, Ian Willey must be looking forward to getting away for a short while on vacation. Timothy Daly regrets having gone back to work in Bordeaux, France.

a day off
one duck reminds another
who’s the boss

* * *

back to work
the warbling blackbird
won’t shut up

Clarke giggled at gaggles of geese and grandfolks.

arrival of winter
in and out of Dublin
Brent geese and retirees

Writing in Tokyo, Junko Saeki believes “there is no wall or discontinuity between life and death.”

majestic swans--
just die as they have lived
swansong

Noting how mother’s groan while birthing, children groan while growing, Stoianka Boianova noted how groans from the dying can lead them to redemption.

strength of spirit--
death groans
turned into song

Noting that “only the wind blows away fallen leaves from an old chestnut tree” in Szczecin, Poland, Dorota Kasparewicz slowly came to realize that she was would have to be the last person to turn off the lights.

autumn
in front of the teahouse a line
of leaves

Zorinc felt a chilling wind in Dubrovnik, Croatia.

streetlight snow drifts--
left on the empty armchair
mother’s wool vest

Monica Kakkar finished her haiku at sundown. Arvinder Kaur heard flute notes on a chilly evening breeze floating across the Ganges River in India. Linus Blessing paid his respects at a cemetery in Berne, Switzerland.

setting sun...
still mulling over a poem
on the paper mulberry leaf

* * *

the music
of the living and the dead
leaves crunch

* * *

swayed by the breeze
the mourning willow’s boughs
waft over the grave

Tejendra Sherchan attended a vigil in Kathmandu, Nepal. Scott Wiggerman attended a funeral in Albuquerque, New Mexico.

lighting candles
for the dead protesters
my eyes follow her

* * *

funeral walk
we toss salt to keep
spirits behind

When the evening trains were cancelled in Gotherington, England, Sheila Barksdale penned this line about her niece walking home alongside the River Thames:

trapped in the city river stars pinch winter’s span

Zeljko Vojkovic looked furtively around the island of Vis, Croatia.

eyes
wide open
darkness everywhere

Grabowska looked back modestly upon her poetry.

end of the year
just a few of my haiku
worth remembering

John S. Gilbertson lay down between a rock and a hard place in Greenville, South Carolina.

tired of this writing,
darkness makes a hard bed
and light sleeps elsewhere

Margaret Ponting rose to a solemn occasion in Victoria, Australia, by singing the lyrics to a Christmas truce composed in 1816 by Joseph Mohr. In Tokyo, Saeki guarded a keepsake. The conclusion reached by these haiku shows how various interpretations and connections can shape the final meaning. Maley hoped for the best.

singing stille nacht carol
soldiers no longer recognize
the face of the enemy

* * *

year comes to an end--
everything was lost
except the Silk of China

* * *

first cuckoos calling,
just like last year--only not--
will this be the last?

Chen-ou Liu took a last deep breath in Ajax, Ontario.

last notes linger...
the crowd breathes in the held silence
then breathes out

The haikuist Tre concluded this robust year-end round of haiku by wishing everyone’s wounds will heal the way the line of dormant trees where she lives in the Blue Ridge Mountains do each winter, “so that we don’t have to carry them into the future.” In Iasi, Romania, Lavana Kray played the outro, the closing section of the final column for this year.

bittersweet
december’s coda
mends first wound

* * *

old songs--
two boots, filled with snow,
by her door

If readers enjoyed the haiku in this column, Olivier-Gabriel Humbert is ready to send a few more from Les Avenieres, France.

final concert
the very first piece learned
as an encore

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The next issues of the Asahi Haikuist Network will appear on Jan. 2, 16, and 30, 2026. Readers are invited to send haiku about running a marathon, horses galloping in the new year or the Japanese prime minister’s promise to “work, work, work and work.” Mail contributions by postcard to David McMurray at the International University of Kagoshima, Sakanoue 8-34-1, Kagoshima, 891-0197, Japan, or by e-mail to (mcmurray@fka.att.ne.jp).

* * *

haiku-mug
David McMurray

David McMurray has been writing the Asahi Haikuist Network column since April 1995, first for the Asahi Evening News. He is on the editorial board of the Red Moon Anthology of English-Language Haiku, columnist for the Haiku International Association, and is editor of Teaching Assistance, a column in The Language Teacher of the Japan Association for Language Teaching (JALT).

McMurray is professor of intercultural studies at The International University of Kagoshima where he lectures on international haiku. At the Graduate School he supervises students who research haiku. He is a correspondent school teacher of Haiku in English for the Asahi Culture Center in Tokyo.

McMurray judges haiku contests organized by The International University of Kagoshima, Ito En Oi Ocha, Asahi Culture Center, Matsuyama City, Polish Haiku Association, Ministry of Foreign Affairs, Seinan Jo Gakuin University, and Only One Tree.

McMurray’s award-winning books include: “Teaching and Learning Haiku in English” (2022); “Only One Tree Haiku, Music & Metaphor” (2015); “Canada Project Collected Essays & Poems” Vols. 1-8 (2013); and “Haiku in English as a Japanese Language” (2003).


    Tuesday, 9 December 2025

    snow falling on cedars: haiku from Asahi Haikuist Network/David McMurray, editor

    We're having a very snowy December this year in Ontario. Most recent years there hasn't been a decent snowfall by Christmas. A memory from the early 1950s when I was in first grade, walking to school through tunnels of snow.

    old time winter

    snow to my chest

    in first grade

    (but I was just over four feet tall)



        

    ASAHI HAIKUIST NETWORK/ David McMurray

    December 5, 2025 at 08:00 JST

    Photo/Illutration(Illustration by Mitsuaki Kojima)

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    winter sunrise a squadron of flamingos fly past the moon
    --Francoise Maurice (Draguignan, France)

    * * *

    peek-a-boo moon
    the child in me
    awakes
    --Tony Williams (Glasgow, Scotland)

    * * *

    stubble moon
    at the edge of winter
    a touch of frost
    --Marion Clarke (Warrenpoint, Northern Ireland)

    * * *

    children’s misery…
    the soft light
    of the moon
    --Helga Stania (Ettiswil, Switzerland)

    * * *

    the wolf moon--
    barking of the neighbour’s dogs
    calling...
    --Julia Guzman (Cordoba, Argentina)

    * * *

    onset of winter
    a wolf’s howl merging
    with the wind
    --John J. Han (Manchester, Missouri)

    * * *

    in the shade of the cedars--
    a pack of wolves
    howl at the moon
    --Giuliana Ravaglia (Bologna, Italy)

    * * *

    icicles
    some trunks blending in
    more easily
    --Jerome Berglund (Minneapolis, Minnesota)

    * * *

    windless night
    the way of the moon
    seaside hotel
    --Doc Sunday (Hiroshima)

    * * *

    freshly fallen
    moonlight through the trees
    owl calls echo
    --Steve Schultz (Georgetown, Texas)

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    FROM THE NOTEBOOK
    ------------------------------

    winter night sky
    the overturned ocean
    frozen starfishes
    --Tejendra Sherchan (Kathmandu, Nepal)

    The haikuist upended the heavens. Maya Daneva headed home before a winter storm reached The Hague, Netherlands.

    short day
    the shore calls my fishing boat
    first snowflakes

    In this column, haikuists wax elegantly in tonight’s full moon. Joshua St. Claire turned on artificial lights.

    half-remembered song
    the scent of honeysuckle
    under the mercury vapor moon

    Chen-ou Liu exhaled in Ajax, Ontario. Pitt Buerken undressed in Munster, Germany.

    my breath
    curling through my wife’s
    first frost

    * * *

    first night frost
    the walnut tree sheds
    its leaves

    Valincia Richard studies haiku at Mississippi Valley State University under the tutelage of her professor, John Zheng.

    moonlight
    we forget
    who leaned first

    In Tokyo, Murasaki Sagano cooled her burning heart in moonshine.

    The cold night
    grated ginger in miso soup
    my heart burns

    * * *

    moonlight poured
    stories into his tumbler
    cut crystal glass

    Slavica Mileva poured a drink called loneliness in Skopje, North Macedonia.

    Fog thickens--
    in the empty home
    tea with rum

    Sipping Japanese rice wine in San Diego, California, Richard L. Matta cheered the arrival of a colorful male waterbird: perhaps it paired with a little brown hen swimming on a winter pond with a nest in a nearby tree.

    sake sharing--
    the mandarin duck
    makes a landing

    The master poet Yosa Buson penned this line in 1751: Oshidori ni bi o tsukushite ya fuyu kodachi

    The mandarin ducks
    they’ve exhausted all beauty--
    winter trees stand stark

    On visit to a park in Kanazawa, Ishikawa Prefecture, Julie Ann Lebitania from Sorsogon, Philippines, saw an example of the winter season word “yukitsuri.”

    trees at Kenrokuen
    supported by ropes
    the touch of first snow

    Masumi Orihara was saddened that “as it gets colder, there are fewer children playing in the park.”

    gradual decay
    ginkgo nuts on a swing
    wintry park

    Refika Dedic’s mother leaves a small bowl of salt by her kitchen window and a saltlick by a tree for animals wintering near Bihac, Bosnia and Herzegovina.

    winter night
    salt left
    in the forest

    Fred Blakey shivered in shadows. Facing a winter squall, Joanna Ashwell flung her arms upward in desperation.

    alone in dark bars
    deep in the city naked
    an icicle tree

    * * *

    advancing closer
    every oak and elm
    akimbo in the storm

    In Rawalpindi, Pakistan, Hifsa Ashraf shuddered. Compare her three lines below to these penned in 1923 by D.H. Lawrence: Never swallows! Bats! The swallows are gone.

    dead of night--
    bats emerging
    from the moon

    Teiichi Suzuki shone brightly last night in Osaka.

    The full moon
    though it’s a perfect circle
    someday will wane

    At twilight in California, Monica Kakkar spotted the planet nicknamed the Evening Star.

    Half Moon Bay...
    opening the night
    Venus in winter

    Ravaglia sketched a silhouette. In Lazarevac, Serbia, Dejan Ivanovic sketched in monochrome. Philmore Place regrets having left Minsk, Belarus.

    cut flowers--
    in the shadow of the room
    ribbons of the moon

    * * *

    first snowflakes
    a black hand strews seeds
    upon the earth

    * * *

    abandoned garden
    don’t let me go again
    ghosts from the past

    Mahfouz conjured a ghost in Paris, France.

    Full moon mountain hare
    Snow coat heathland camouflage
    Devours fogbow, wights

    Ravaglia sensed the touch of a ghostly wind. Arvinder Kaur wondered if soldiers would soon return home. Archie G. Carlos was caught between a rock and a hard place in St. Louis Park, Minnesota.

    empty chair--
    as the moon rises
    it swings

    * * *

    moonlight
    rising from the trenches
    end of war

    * * *

    dad’s firm stand
    about a nursing home
    hard frost

    Angela Giordano penned this line as she walked by a cold home in Avigliano, Italy.

    An old man locked in his house out of fear of the unknown

    Christina Chin weathered through “a hair-raising experience” at a friend’s house in Kuching, Borneo.

    the soothsayer reads
    her card and sprinkles
    salt and black pepper

    * * *

    throwing salt
    around the house
    she rids of the spirits

    Charlotte Bird whispered a prayer in Phoenix, Arizona.

    the floorboards strewn
    with salt prayers--
    dark November

    Zoe Mahfouz reported on why old weather lingers in Paris, France.

    Winter storm clusters
    Forecasters gone with the wind
    Polar vortex eye

    Remarking that it was “the first snowfall in Nagoya in a long time,” Satoru Kanematsu enjoyed inspecting this line of troops in the snowball corps.

    “Good morning” parade of snowmen made by kids

    As a wintertime game in Oroslavje, Croatia, Gordana Vlasic recalled exhaling white vapor.

    smell of smoke
    the boy shows off
    in front of his friends

    A.J. Johnson cleared snow and ice from out front a home in Stephens City, Virginia.

    cold wind
    leaf prints fade
    on the sidewalk

    Marilyn Humbert was suddenly dusted by snow in Sydney, Australia.

    possum paws slip
    crossing a frosty roof
    first winter night

    Jennifer Gurney began her morning where it left off last evening in Broomfield, Colorado.

    the day unfolds
    cold and crisp, a sheet left
    overnight on the line

    Dorna Hainds wore this white dress just once, before folding it away in Lapeer, Michigan. Richard L. Matta squeezed in another hanger in San Diego, California. Williams’s family insulated the entrance way to their home. Pamela A. Babusci got ready to color winter in Rochester, New York. Govind Joshi washed woolens in Dehradun, India.

    folded snowflake--
    in the back of the closet,
    a wedding dress yellowing

    * * *

    edge of winter
    the thickening
    of the coat rack

    * * *

    second frost--
    our thicker coats
    move up a peg

    * * *

    end of autumn
    sorting my winter berets
    into colors

    * * *

    handwashing pullover
    the heaviness 
    of winter

    Writing from Seattle, Washington, Horst Ludwig felt as though he had entered the winter of life. In Paris, France, Emil Karla felt life slip away through his hands.

    Is age a season?
    One of my questions no more
    not still wide open

    * * *

    fallen hair
    the bathtub white
    of a winter morn

    Tim Dwyer reflected on his years in Bangor, Northern Ireland.

    rising moon
    almost touchable…
    how I have lived

    Sagano compared sepia photos taken at the end of World War II and several years later.

    Parents photo
    from an album
    put aside

    * * *

    Soldier’s uniform
    changed into business suits
    father’s photos

    * * *

    On father’s coffin
    hand-woven silk kimono
    loved wearing at home

    Cornelia Rossberg reached up in Coburg, Germany.

    Top shelf row
    in the shop window
    winter boots

    Ram Chandran can’t be cured of what ails him in Madurai, India. Stania knows what to drink when it snows on the Swiss mountains. Buttoning up his overcoat, David Cox recalled his warm holidays in Palermo, Italy.

    winter solitude--
    a never ending
    love sickness

    * * *

    Italian coffee
    and Swiss chocolates--
    snow falls

    * * *

    holiday flat--
    saying my goodbyes to
    the coffee machine

    Slawa Sibiga turned to the December page of a tradwife calendar in Tychy, Poland. Chen-ou Liu noticed the lost and found in Ajax, Ontario.

    first snow
    the poster girl
    in a red bikini

    * * *

    a red bikini
    pinned to the noticeboard...
    sunlit waves lapping

    Opening her curtains in Iasi, Romania, Mirela Brailean was pleasantly surprised. Simona Brinzaru was surprised by a Christmas cactus in Transylvania, Romania.

    the first snowflakes
    a rose blooms behind the curtain
    unknowingly

    * * *

    unexpected flower
    on the desert ground
    hope--still there

    Yutaka Kitajima welcomed “a newcomer to our region in Joetsu, Niigata. Its natural habitat has moved northward due to global warming.”

    Tonight too
    gray-bellied gecko
    on the pane

    Morgan Ophir is eager to play outdoors in Sydney, Australia. Marek Printer rekindled the spark of pure, uncontainable joy in Kielce, Poland.

    first snowfall
    two kitten noses pressed
    against the window

    * * *

    first snow...
    the kindergarten window
    filled with nose prints

    Tsanka Shishkova watched the day begin from behind a soundproof window in Sofia, Bulgaria.  In St. Andrews, Scotland, David Greenwood was startled when an animal returned his stare.

    in the morning silence
    sound of frozen branches
    leaping squirrels

    * * *

    autumn alders
    the dancing squirrel checks
    that I’m still watching

    Melissa Dennison watched a startling replay. Philip Davison drove through river mist in Dublin, Ireland.

    Amur tiger
    sizes up the camera trap
    in the snow

    * * *

    astray on the road 
    cataract headlamps lighting 
    the nightjar’s domain

    Forsaking his hometown, James Penha resolved, “I never want to experience another New York winter.” Sipping a hot “kava” while listening to robins sing in her garden, Mihovila Ceperic-Biljan recommended wintering in Rijeka, Croatia.

    Bali heatwave
    perspires and inspires
    dreams of winter

    * * *

    climate change
    coffee on the balcony--
    first day of winter

    Artur Zielinski lost sight of the trail he was following in Gdynia, Poland. Leon Tefft has lost contact with old friends in Greenville, South Carolina.

    Morning frost dusts
    the cranberry red--
    the track disappears

    * * *

    cold moon
    crossing names off
    the Christmas list

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    The year-end issue of the Asahi Haikuist Network will appear Dec. 19. Readers are invited to compose a haiku about a swansong and send it by postcard to David McMurray at the International University of Kagoshima, Sakanoue 8-34-1, Kagoshima, 891-0197, Japan, or by e-mail to (mcmurray@fka.att.ne.jp).

    * * *

    haiku-mug
    David McMurray

    David McMurray has been writing the Asahi Haikuist Network column since April 1995, first for the Asahi Evening News. He is on the editorial board of the Red Moon Anthology of English-Language Haiku, columnist for the Haiku International Association, and is editor of Teaching Assistance, a column in The Language Teacher of the Japan Association for Language Teaching (JALT).

    McMurray is professor of intercultural studies at The International University of Kagoshima where he lectures on international haiku. At the Graduate School he supervises students who research haiku. He is a correspondent school teacher of Haiku in English for the Asahi Culture Center in Tokyo.

    McMurray judges haiku contests organized by The International University of Kagoshima, Ito En Oi Ocha, Asahi Culture Center, Matsuyama City, Polish Haiku Association, Ministry of Foreign Affairs, Seinan Jo Gakuin University, and Only One Tree.

    McMurray’s award-winning books include: “Teaching and Learning Haiku in English” (2022); “Only One Tree Haiku, Music & Metaphor” (2015); “Canada Project Collected Essays & Poems” Vols. 1-8 (2013); and “Haiku in English as a Japanese Language” (2003).